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Post by MesoZombie on Wed Oct 15, 2008 12:16 pm

nope just random people...
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Post by Don Ramón on Wed Oct 15, 2008 12:46 pm

Are Those guys named Dick?
j/k

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by El Duderino on Wed Oct 15, 2008 12:57 pm

Sorry but I find it hard to tell that that is sac boy... not your fault though... sac boy is hard to do since he looks like any comic matchstick man... also he is very new and always wheres different clothes... maybe there is a visual way to make sure people know is sac boy... else you might have to write it in the dialogue somewhere... still a very good pic..
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:45 pm

this is a test. i realized that a three to 4 panel comic will take up some killer page space in teh 500X350 size i have it so i scaled it down...what do you guys think

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by pichu on Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:49 pm

wait... what? o_O
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:57 pm

^okay i played with it some more pichu update...i am doing another strip for don its s going to be mario as a assassin killing sack boy here is the first two cells

that's weird it wont let me load the right ones





got it fixed


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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by El Duderino on Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:01 pm

^^ sac boy wants Marios thorne ??? Don´t worry I´m dyslectic too...
Is it supposed to get blurry in the background of the second panel ???

I like it
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Post by MesoZombie on Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:03 pm

yeah its supposed to be blurry b/c i wanted to focus on teh foreground
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:01 pm

alright dont have the text but one more for you guys, this is actually based on another drawng of i saw of him...its not quite done just yet

update



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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Gengibre on Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:11 pm

Wow meso, your art style is getting a nice shape, now, buy yourself a nice tablet Razz
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:32 am

alright got teh last cell done...let put it on a page and you guys can tell me what i need to clean up




this is all spaced and sized to be on 8.5 by 11 paper, that should be close to you mag size right?
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Don Ramón on Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:55 am

They will be resized so, dont worry about size. Very good work meso!!!
Only change I could suggest is in the last panel... probably showing mario cap.
And making the knife shot blurrier, since kids will read the mag.

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Post by El Duderino on Thu Oct 16, 2008 11:08 am

Looking good... yeah seeing the mario cap would make it visually more obvious that its mario... then again he is saying the mario tag line... still we don´t want stupid people or an-alphabets to feel left out...
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:28 pm

how about this

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Don Ramón on Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:30 pm

nice!!!

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by El Duderino on Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:00 pm

dibs on the Gears 2 review Smile... I better make it preview... don´t want to get into trouble...
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Don Ramón on Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:23 pm

Hhaha
Do the review!

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by El Duderino on Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:25 pm

^^ ok... should be finished with it long before Fable 2 and Fallout 3 so I´m not under too much pressure... when is the last date I have to post the review again ??? I´ll probably do it in the last night anyway Smile
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:49 pm

if you want it you can have my dark sector one as well
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Don Ramón on Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:05 pm

YEs I Will... Thanks Guys!!

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Don Ramón on Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:48 am

Just a reminder

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:17 am

do you need anythign else from me?
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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Don Ramón on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:18 am

yes... the green zombie cat pic...
for your credits...

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by MesoZombie on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:25 am

ummmm let me see if i still have it some where

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Re: Don Ramon Needs your Help.

Post by Don Ramón on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:40 am

dont you have it bigger?

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